If I Could

If I Could

A Poem by Blackvelvet
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Quotes I have written

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If I could make dreams come true, you would wake each day warmed by a blanket of love, laied softly upon your heart.

© 2008 Blackvelvet


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I find it doesn't take a lot of words to express how one feels toward anouther, and you did it beautifuly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simplicity at its finest. Welcome to Writers Cafe!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your words are a blanket of love which not only warm ones heart but inspire ones soul.

Beautifully written!

I am blessed to have read something so lovely and profound.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow that is such a beautiful picture of a loving relationship. Thanks for this short but good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it ! how you described in few words the whole world of love and care good work Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a lovely quotation, but needs a few typo corrections; 'dreams', 'laid' and 'upon' �

Excellent romantic and creative write!

Phill(ozofee)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Blackvelvet
Blackvelvet

Summerside



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I am a simple living person that enjoys the outdoors meeting new people, writing ,reading poetry, almost anything creative. I have 4 grown children and 8 Grandchildren that fill my heart more than any.. more..

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