I hear the sound

I hear the sound

As you slowly

Push down the keys

 

Ringing in my ears

The music that comes

From your misery

 

I can feel the pain

In the notes

That you play so hauntingly

 

To be heard

Your songs plead

Life has a way

Of writing these

 

They reach out

And touch me

As if I am

In this life

That I do not lead

 

To connect to us all

They strangely somehow succeed

We are left feeling every drop

That your fingers bleed

Author's Note

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Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

it was a wonderful read... also i know i have had a time when i felt like my life was out of my control and their was so much i wanted to do to help and change but didn't know how to take control and this is what this poem reminds me of... i really liked it and keep writing...

[Krystyna Herst]

Your work is ver moving. I like it :3

[EMMIE]

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS IT'S SO CREATIVE AND FULL OF TALENT!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing... Keep it up.. Do you read mine to Anguish...

[Birdman313]

a stunning poem

[LilyLily]

i really like how it ends, especially the line "that your fingers bleed." i feel like the ending really sums of the visuals and gives the piece a more dramatic tone in those last few words.

[Ruth]

Your work infuses so many emotions together and always makes the reader feel fuflfiled..a delicate and intricate piece xoxo

[fireblossom]

The eee of the last word per stanza leads (forgive the eee word) us along.

This is a great poem. I was reminded of hearing Chopin...feeling Chopin. Being drawn in to understand what the artist was trying to say.

Good write.

[EMF]

I think this may be the best thing I have ever read from you. A stunning poem, with such pace and structure I am envious. A truly wonderful read. Thank you for posting this. It shows what class can do.

[Groovy]

powerful write , much enjoyed

[Kenneth The Poet]

Scary stuff. Darkness bleeds profusely through this piece.