Nothings

Nothings

 

You want it, but you dont.
You feel it, but you wont.
You see it, but your blind.
Something, that doesn’t hide.
 
You say it, but you’re mute.
You aim, but you can’t shoot.
You seek, But you won’t find.
We’re missing the the clear blue sky.

You need it, its right here.
You breathe it, it’s not fear.
You have it, not for long
Expressions right and wrong.

You’re awake, when i’m asleep.
You searching, what i can’t keep.
You’re staring, with no eyes.
So simple i’m not surprised.

You remember, what i forget.
You’re calm, when i fret.
You guide me, when i’m lost.
You gave everything, at no cost.

Reviews

[alison13]

i read this poem once more and it's really good. i love the rhythm and not annoying like on some poems and it does not cringe on your ear. good job. :)

[Alicia™]

This is really interesting... I'm not sure why, but there's something in it that I really like! Keep up the good work! :)

[alison13]

it's a good poem..keep on writing..