Boys

Boys

A Poem by blackrose24

Boys

 

Boys?

When they want to play with you,
They'll introduce theirselves.
Friends until they started to court you;
And when you finally fall for them,
It's then until they say goodbye
Since they're bored to you.
But you shouldn't cry
But should just always smile
What's the use of karma?

© 2010 blackrose24


Charlie
Fly the plane

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this is simply adorable. and i love the last line. what's the use of karma? lol. like what they say, karma is only a b***h if you are. i like it how you are very straight-forward on your writing. good job. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Karma is a pain in the butt. When we do bad things in love and life will bite us in the a*s one day. I like the poem. Wisdom of a sort. Don't cry and allow them to win another victory. Smile and move on to something better. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


that is so true.. and i love the last part.. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


What you described in this poem was so true, and I liked how honest you were about that. The situation that you described in your poem is one that I'm sure a lot of girls are able to relate to, and the strength and hope that you captured is certainly something that we should all take away from reading this poem. The last line brought a smile to my face. :)
Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago



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