IF I SAID I LOVE YOU

IF I SAID I LOVE YOU

A Poem by The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
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ONCE AGAIN ABOUT ADRIAN

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if i told u how i felt

would u make me melt

if i told u how i felt would u say it's just wat ur dealt

 

if i gave u all my heart

would u say it's wat u nvr sought

if i gave u all my heart

would u only tear it apart

 

if i told u that ur mine

would u take it has a sign

if i told u that ur mine

would u say it's truley fine

 

if i said i love u

would u make my wish come true

if i said i love u

would u say it too

© 2008 The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family


Author's Note

The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
does it sound sappy? and ignore how it's written in "IM"

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awesome, so not that sappy, it is full of emotion and that makes it great:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh thats very nice..
how i love this..i f i give you all my heart,would you tear it apart,
if i told you how i felt..would you make me melt
if i said i love you,would you say it too..
thats so nice,oh yes love is wonderful,if you give all your love,all yourself to someone
just make sure its the right one to appreciate what you gave away..
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family
The Everyday Surprises of Having a Family

Bastrop, TX



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I'm a poet... well not so much anymore. Most of my poems stemmed from relationship troubles but thats of the past. Now my baby and my hubby are my life. But i still LOVE LOVE LOVE music, as does hu.. more..

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