AARON

this iz about the guy i love

you're gone for now~

sad that we're apart~

but you're alwayz there~

kept sacred in my heart~

 

 

you're alwayz on my mind~

and i miss you so much~

i really want to see you~

i'm longing for your touch~

 

 

it would be heaven~

for us to be together~

if i saw you again~

life would be better~

 

 

happy you still love me~

never stopped loving you~

you're my one and only~

you know it's all true~
 

Author's Note

this is about who i love... what do you think?

Reviews

[Wildecat]

A nice love poem, short sweet and to the point.

[The Everyday Surprises ..]

i dont want 2 review my own poems it's a bit vain cause i think most of my poems r great so u do the reviewing 4 me

[AmeliaRose]

i like it, it flows well too and sounds like a song. good job

[Adrian K. Smith]

It is interesting in the fact that it remains positive throughout the sadness and the longing for him. It is not the typical "oh woe is me, poor me" that you see so much of from time to time. For that, in being positive, I appreciate your taking the time to share that with us.

[Mysty Rayn]

You expressed your feelings very well. A good start. Keep writing.