Emotion of devotion

Emotion of devotion

A Poem by Alexis suzzanne

Emotion is the devin right we all have. Its a gift not so common  we all think our  emotion or devotion is a powerful feeling of love,life and sometimes liberty. emotion of devotion is a notion of devotion, an antidote for the mind. A heeling power for the sick and a sympathetic eye for the dead. Oceans are full of devotion and death is only the beginning of a long journey ahead of the human life of all beautiful bountiful lives. Devotion occurs even in the most impossible times forsome it brings hope others for not. Thy shall not hurt other's emotions or notions of  their own devotion or selfish light . The devotion for them has been givin from the long sight as much as light.

Let thy light sine over your devotion of selfish notion of your devotion.

© 2011 Alexis suzzanne


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So now all you have to do is rewrite this piece, correcting all the mistakes, so that when someone reads it they can understand it properly. Then you will have given your readers something beautiful.

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Added on September 19, 2011
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Alexis suzzanne
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My name is Alexis, I am young lady full of inspiration and love , I have been writing since I was 6 years old.I am down to eath person that sees the world as a canvas. Whether you paint it is up to yo.. more..

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