In a Girl's Eyes

This is my first ever poem I created back when I was in Grade 10. I just want to share it. :)

You can always see her laughing
Look at her and she's smiling
But what if behind everything,
There's a pain that she's hiding.

She can make you smile when you feel sad,
She can encourage you when you feel down.
She can help you with your problems,
But can't help herself from circumstances

If you'll only look at her eyes
You could see the pain inside.
Because she's fine outside
But deep inside, she's crying and sad

She's not showing it when she's jealous,
Pretending to be happy even when it hurts.
Try to look at her eyes and you'll see the worst,
The sadness and pain she doesn't deserve.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dolce Vita]

What sophisticated writing!