Street Party

Silencing the "Noise" isn't easy, but it's fun to try.

Breaking! Breaking! Breaking!
The noise, the volume...
Smash it! Smash it!
Despair, chaos, misery
Let go and get going
Break it! Break it!
The wall must fall
And so will you all

The pain is painstaking

The trick is mistaking
The truth, breathtaking
A life in the making

Author's Note

One of my least favorite pieces, so be as harsh as you want.

Reviews

[DarkkxVoid]

Not bad, Decent writing, The text choice also helped a little bit with the feel. Unfortunately the poem doesn't quite speak to me. Every-time I read it I understand it a little bit better. Being as short as it is however I can only relate on a moderate level. Overall not bad.