Existence

I breathe in

I breathe out

I hear the beat of my heart

I hear the murmur of my mind...

Who really am i?

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I am not sure why, but this some seemed to fit the words. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZoD8JEFjAE

Maybe it reflects the beat and note of every word.

[KAin]

Strength. Self-awareness. Pride. The dignity of the poet is clearly felt in this piece. An inhalation of that made you what you were. An exhalation of pain and doubt. What remains is the certainty of what you are, and the reality of you. There's a calm determination in this poem... As though after every blow the world has dealt, you're softly saying "I'm still standing." thank you for sharing this.

[AYVID N]

So in tune with oneself, the poet has reached a truly enlightened state from where the rest of the journey will be an informed and purposeful one. You said so much in so few a lines and with such beauty and flair. My compliments to you Belle.

[Belle]

Thank you for the kind words, my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel these words could be referring to someone who has just retrieved her heart...went through the loss, the pain, the feeling of inadequacy in love....and now being alone again recovers herself, her self-esteem, her will to move on...
and knows she will once again "be the person she was"

nicely done

jacob