I think I love you...

Something for someone.. ;)

I thought i had gotten over you,
comforted by a glass of bourbon,
but there you were again, dressed in black,
and before i knew i was back to square one.

I don't know what locked my stare,
but something just clicked inside me,
you were standing there watching, smiling,
it was like a living fantasy.

we talked, we shared,
we laughed and cared,
challenged the limits as far as i dared,
my vision emotionally impaired.

I know not why i fell for you,
I don't have much to give,
maybe i was not thinking straight,
or maybe i just wanted to live.

I know the problem is with me somewhere,
'coz you are too good to be true,
i don't know how to bring this out,
but i think i love you.  

Reviews

[Blackdragon]

frankly you r one of the few people who grasped the actually got the intention behind this poem.. for others it ws just a petty love story.. :) thx for the review..

[TTBoy28]

Being drunk brings out so many emotions that we otherwise couldn't say. This is a very thought provoking piece - as I think about this drunkard at the stage of dying. I don't know if this was your initial intention with this piece, but this does make sense.