It Hurts..

A poem.. random thoughts.. whatever.. i thought its good.. so posting it.. all types of comments are welcome.. do review..

Sometimes life seems impossible
there's no one to go to
you seem the only hope
then you turn your face away too.

You may not realise it then
but it hurts..

Sometimes all the paths go dark
All the doors closed
you seem the perfect one
every factor predisposed.

A simple "no" may mean nothing to you
but it hurts..

Sometimes life gets too unfair
all i want to do is run far away.
your hand is the only thing that holds me back
silently wishing if i could just stay.

Not giving that hand may be just another gesture to you
but it hurts..

Sometimes a little "sorry" is all it takes
to heal the age-old scars.
was it too difficult for you to say it?
or was i wrong in believing those stars?

Not saying "sorry" may make you feel better
but it hurts..

It hurts..

Author's Note

kindly forgive any mistakes as this is one of my earliest blogs..

Reviews

the 3rd stanza is my favorite, good rhythm there.

Sometimes I wish that people would watch what they say, you know?
a person may be ignorant to the fact that they're hurting someone with what they say, or maybe just indifferent to it. I wish that they'd take the time to realize, "oh, that would hurt if someone said that to me too".

[SamBug]

This is such a true piece. Great job!!!!

[ShaneBerry]

how honest! very nice!

[Mary]

very true