Illusions

Illusions

A Poem by blackbelief

It's funny how little
the world
seems from a 20th floor apartment
window.
There's black and more of it,
lighter and darker,
and then there's a
subtle flicker
of yellows and reds;
all in the sound of silence.

It's 4 'o clock in the morning,
and you sit gazing at the
countless illusions
that a lone and monotonous life offers.
Wishful thoughts flow in a myriad streams
all ending in a metropolitan dream.
"You'll one day own the life 
that the man in the suit coming out of his Royce has."

Illusions are lollipops laced in cyanide.

© 2016 blackbelief


Author's Note

blackbelief
The "lollipops laced in cyanide" is taken from a reference.
A poem by Elizabeth - Of lollipops and cyanide.
"http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/betty965/708648/"
Make sure you read it. Its worth every ounce of time you spend reading it and more.

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Actually, while reading, it feels like I am 20th floor and watching this world and people going through diverse life with sundry emotions. You have written the poem beautifully, I can read it again and again without loosing the same feeling as I go through reading it now. Concluding part is too good, I too think the same sometimes but then I realize it is just an "Illusion". Amazingly,written!
"You'll one day own the life
that the man in the suit coming out of his Royce has."


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Again, an engaging poem. Good imagery . . . a kind of dreamscape poem.

Tom

Posted 5 Years Ago


Actually, while reading, it feels like I am 20th floor and watching this world and people going through diverse life with sundry emotions. You have written the poem beautifully, I can read it again and again without loosing the same feeling as I go through reading it now. Concluding part is too good, I too think the same sometimes but then I realize it is just an "Illusion". Amazingly,written!
"You'll one day own the life
that the man in the suit coming out of his Royce has."


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This composition portrays the human emotions beautifully. Illusions are the things that keep us going. Making us step forward and believing in ourselves. Nice reading it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 2, 2016
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