Thoughts about Wind

And so it thought 

       and 

          wonder-dared,

"May be, his majesty 

             is too busy to care...."

"Sometimes all that fallen leaves want,

             is to stay,

                or may be flow a diverse way."

Author's Note

have I expressed it correctly? Is it too hard to grasp?

Reviews

[Papaya]

"Sometimes all that fallen leaves want, is to stay, or may be flow a diverse way."

I thought you expressed yourself very well. Beautifully.
Your last lines were perfect and to me speak to wanting acceptance, tolerance but also a change of pace or scenery without sacrificing our core beliefs.

[iamshadowine]

This is great imagery! i loved the usage of words here!
keep writing :D

[ms. barrie]

You captured it and I caught it, all too well.
amazing metaphors...imagery and flow.
Very unique imagery depicting a wistful
aching. brilliant write...thanks for sharing! :)

[blackbelief]

no no no, don't thank me, thank you! :D

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Very much enjoyed this :)) - and no...
Thank you!