Look into you

Just the result of a personal life crisis of my friends, a little wondering and 2 hours of boredom

It'd be nice to see once in a while

People speaking openly their mind

Wouldn't it be strange to hear

That people know what they feel

What we have instead

is trickery and lies

sometimes undisguised

in a blind hatred

- laughing tears and smiles -

and what justifies

all this misery?

Would it be a shame to hear

that others know how you feel

Would it be a shame to find

out that others know your mind

better than...

yourself?

 

 

 

 

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This poem is dedicated to:

Dalma Deák &

Roland Ostorházy

Hoping that you learn life's lessons well and next time pass the test

Author's Note

Note please:
1. English is not my mother tongue
2. The form might be strange... I just got an idea to try to express the volume of how I would read this poem aloud by changing the size of the lines
Enjoy!

Reviews

[Hanalia]

Tetszik hogy van ritmusa annak ellenére hogy nem az angol az anyanyelved, meg még az is hogy olyan egyszerűen mond el fontos dolgokat.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s so original and provokes thinking...I like it !