HOLD ON

Hold on to my hand

When you feel alone,

Coldness will go away and be gone,

Let's stay like this in this imaginary world,

And when I wake up don't forget me,

Even though we TWO are not always ONE,

I want us to be clueless together

and when the light's are on

 I won't threaten you

OR deceive you,

So please sing me a ballad,

The tale of dumb and dumber,

Even though we surrender,

We go down with pride,

So please,

Please,

Hold on tight.

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Love this piece, it's really good. Particularly like the line "We go down with pride". XD

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Aw, immortal (yes, I remembered XDD). This is so sweet, and I love the emphasis that you put on "TWO" and "ONE" very sweet indeed, kinda gave me a fuzzy feeling inside which can be quite hard methinks. Very sweet, lovely piece of writing here, well done. Farewell, immortal~

[TJ]

Very beautifully written I believe.

[Linear]

It's a sweet poem, well written with a good flow to it