Snow white and the seven kidnappers

Snow white and the seven kidnappers

A Chapter by Hush Hush

10 years later...

One.
Two.
Three.
Four...no...just three.
Three scars this time.
I sighed misreably as I tied a knot with my teeth. Finished! I looked over my handiwork expectantly, "Wow, it sucks."
"It sure does", said Kaitleen grumply as she untied the bandage again and re-done it with swift precision.
" Thank you my darling," I looked at my hand admiringly "What would I do without you?".
"Die. Horribly. In the pits of hell." She answered gravely as she stood up, dusting her leather jeans.
" You're breaking my heart." I mouthed at her and dodged the knife she aimed at my head. I giggled and hid  behind the nearest tree, hearing three more thuds in front of me. Huh, she got better. I stepped in front of my hiding place intending to take out the knifes Kaitleen supposedly hit but to my outmost annoyance, it was a message. Encrypted. 
Written in blood. 
With Kait out of sight.
Typical.

17 hours later...

"I'm sow sobby" Sobbed Kaithleen, blowing her nose.

"Seriously K., it's not your fault. It is not your fault that you were kidnapped seven times today, that I had to scathe, scorche and kill my way in to save you out of the clutches of some barbarian who was about to rape you while being at risk of loosing my innocence at it as well. Hmm... wait maybe I should be nicer to you seeing, as you went through such traumatic EVENTS...
....
....Nah, sorry but its totally your fault. " I said cheerfully.

We were on our way home, riding on my horse, seeing as K's was stolen and I just didn't  have enough time stealing another one whilst being chased by an angry mob of over-grown, over-sexed men. Plus they smelled.
I managed to loose them after two friggin' hours of riding on unknown paths in the dark. At least it was dark, no moon to give us away, no...
I stopped the horse suddenly, hushed K and listened. I could hear nothing, no grasshoppers, no owls hunting, no anima...
" Oh s**t!" I cursed under my breath, turned back my horse and ordered her to gallop the way we just came from.
Towards the murderous mob and as fast as I could get us away...
away from...
Pure...
White...
Horror. 


© 2010 Hush Hush


Author's Note

Hush Hush
I will make the chapters kind of short at first so as not to scare ya'll with all the writing. Please correct me if I made any grammar mistakes or such, comments appreciated :)

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Hmm, I rather like this :D It's interesting and has pulled me into the concept of the story, I'm looking forward to future chapters! The one thing I would say that put me off ever-so-slightly (though not altogether, I assure you, I enjoyed this) is the amount of ellipsis that you used. I understand that you wish to represent the pauses and such, but I wouldn't use them too much if I were you, they can put some people off a bit as it may feel unnecessary, but that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work and, as I've mentioned, I'm looking forward to more chapters! Until then, farewell mortal ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Hmm, I rather like this :D It's interesting and has pulled me into the concept of the story, I'm looking forward to future chapters! The one thing I would say that put me off ever-so-slightly (though not altogether, I assure you, I enjoyed this) is the amount of ellipsis that you used. I understand that you wish to represent the pauses and such, but I wouldn't use them too much if I were you, they can put some people off a bit as it may feel unnecessary, but that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work and, as I've mentioned, I'm looking forward to more chapters! Until then, farewell mortal ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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