The Other Light

You imprisoned me within the Darkness,
Left me to be consumed by Sadness and Madness,
You left me with nothing but my broken wings,
While you flew away,
And threw away the key
To my heart,
Empty eyes stare at me,
Never knowing if i'm to be or not to be,
Seemed like months when
I gave up my hope
Of ever seeing your face,
All I can do now
Is to pray...
Pray that somebody finds me ,
Pray that somebody listens,
To my voice shouting.

Reviews

[Another Relic]

Nicely done Hush. I like the formatting too.

[Linear]

What a really beautiful poem, Impressed I am

[SilentSKY]

Very good- the only error I found was in the 5th line- "And through away the key" should be "And threw away the key". You confused "through" with "threw". :)