Broken Heart ( Weird Writers Prompt)

In the palm of my hand,

Secret

Lie,

No one knows who you truly are,

Emotions

Hidden

From the world,

They all pretend to know,

Even though I,

I spy

I seek

I obtain,

No one blames her,

No one points

What a shame,

Could you figure this riddle out?

"Whole soul is better than I",

Crashing

Smashing

Stop!

Enough!

Even though tears fall down,

Even though you'll never be truly mine,

I know that over time,

I will be missing pieces of my broken heart...

Author's Note

Erm, Don't know if I got the prompt right ...AGAIN... but here it is :)

Reviews

[deeps]

Simply amazing work here. I like the weirdness here.

[rhadamanthys]

awesomeness like it and let your soul fly to what you think it should be

[nono]

Very nice, interesting. I'm impressed. Keep up the great work. I think your doing awesome with the prompts. Whatever you get from the prompts is what you get, you don't have to necessarily follow it completely. Keep up the good work!

[Little Wanderer]

This is lovely, and sad :] I really like the ending. And dw about not getting the prompts right! - They can be confuzzling at times :D