Without You

Without you

The wind blows, the grass grows

the seasons change

The sun burns, the earth turns

without you

the flowers bloom, rivers flow

rain falls

Life goes on

but my world stops

Without you

Time goes on

But I'm lost, in a daze

the world passes me by

Without you

Babies cry, children play, adults work

Seems nothing is wrong

These things I see, yet I don't see

Because I'm trapped in this life

without you

Reviews

[Just Cat]

Aww... wow... I can relate to the feelings in this, being trapped, things seeming normal around you but everything isn't. It's a strange mix, but a well written piece. Nice work! :)

[wijdan]

it really good

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow.... I can relate so well..... Well..... about 4 months ago I could....
Being caged inside the life a loved one left behind sucks..
Otherwise, awesome job, and you portrayed the feeling of loss very well....

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Larry Dyson]

Make it a point to not let that happen...those i know on the soul level ..always stay in some type of existence...Mano a Mano conMigo..Verdad Amigo?