Writing on the wall

It has begun to take form in my mind

the conclusion is coming

the result is obvious to me

are you really so blind?

can you really not see how this goes?

when we part, it will not be merely a physical separation

this is the end of us

i see it now

the trust is gone

i'm not sure it ever really existed

and as preparations are made

you still hold onto the lie you've told yourself

you expect me to believe these lies

i cannot believe them

i'm no naive little boy

i learned long ago how to see the writing on the wall

and perhaps this is for the best

perhaps you'll finally find what you're looking for

maybe you'll finally be happy instead of just pretending

and maybe the rage that burns in me will cool

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like the words "i learned long ago how to see the writing on the wall". Most people are blinded to the destine future and close their eyes. I like this poem. Straight to the point and no weakness. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[FallenHeroXx]

I love this poem.. It's relatable to me :) keep it coming Drako :)

Palle

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is a great poem and it would make a great song. Well done. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very strong Poem, Love the way it flows! Well written!

[Deviant Works]

Excellent, Drako. You are a strong, passionate, powerful writer sharing works that many, including myself can relate with. "I learned long ago how to see the writing on the wall". Deception surely has its own language. "I'm no naive little boy". And you have the power. Perfect poem.