Pain of a man

Pain of a man

A Poem by Drako

Funny how you say the things you do
and expect me to just forgive you
every word you say
every act you take
has a price
has a consequence
you jump down my throat for sharing an opinion
an opinion i gave to help you with a decision
you didn't stop to analyze what i said
you didn't think about a nice way to respond
you lashed out
like i'm the one in the wrong
they say sticks and stones can break your bones
but words can never hurt you
whoever said that had never met you
the things you say hurts
hurts far worse than if you struck me
words are everything to one such as me
the words you use are hurtful to say the least
you expect me to stay
you expect me to love you
but all i get in return 
are the harshest of words
you can't love someone like that
even with my temper i don't do the things you do
i don't say the things you say
and you tell me i need help
maybe i do, but you need it too
i tire of being hurt
i tire of being accused
i tire of being with you
when this is what i must go through
if what you want is a passive man
someone that just stands there and takes it all
someone that does what you say, when you say it
someone content to stay home while you enjoy life
someone to be at your complete beck and call
find yourself a little boy, for that is what you really want
i am a man
a man with feelings
a man with pride
i am a man that speaks his mind
i am a man that fights back
i am a man that needs a social life
I am a man that resists when necessary
I am not a boy
i will not keep being hurt like this
I will not sit back and take your harsh words
I am not your child
I could stoop to your level
I could hurt you the same way you do me
I know what button to push
but i'm a man, not a boy
unlike you
so i won't go that low
I don't believe in purposely hurting someone I love
I am a man, not a boy
I will stand tall
I will show love
I will not run from commitment
I will not chase love away
But at the same time
I won't stay with you
If this is what you must put me through

© 2010 Drako


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Too many boys running around instead of men. Which is why relationships don't work out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


be a man and let the childish ways stay with a boy these relationship real talk this what life is fill with people not working as one to keep love to be selfish with games , who got time for that , i don`t , outstanding again

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem just about says it all. The problem with so many couples is they can no longer SEE each other. We want so many things from our partners and in truth what are we willing to sacrifice in return. In this poem it's as if you stand on the brink, you have already done all that you can and now there is nothing left to give. You know yourself and your worth and that is what makes this poem great and different from many others. Shoved away, hurt and yet you haven't forgotten yourself. Great poem, Drako.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sounds EXACTLY like the last and final relationship I will EVER subject myself to~
your clear and precise honesty is at both revelatory in its painful circumstances but also progresses through a self liberation as the narrator finally accepts it for what it is and begins to set up standards for what he will and WILL NOT tolerate~
excellent!!!~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Drako
Drako

Saint Louis, MO



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I have many names, my actual name being brandon, but i go by Drako. I have been writing for years and discovered this site thanks to a friend on facebook. more..

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