Her Answer......

When we're together I fly so high
That I could tickle the whole sky,
Caressing clouds while in the rain,
With you I find I have no restraint.

Flying high in a hot air balloon.
On a one way trip to the moon.
Down to earth... into outer space,  
Always traveling in your embrace.

Dancing and teasing the seashores
A taste of your lips, my spirit soars.
Riding with you, my world is complete  
Rotating around your every heartbeat.

 Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.

 

 

Reviews

[Carole]

This is beautiful Brenda...

Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.

Wishing you and Jack the very best! Jackie will be very blessed to have such a wonderful lady for a step mom. I always loved that kid. Was such a nice young man, and now he is not so young any more, but you know-it's funny-He hasn't changed that much. Just looks like an older "Jackie." Tell Jack "Hello" from us and tell him congrats as well!

Carole XO

[shadadakiya]

very sweet,and fromthe heart,hugs

[Phil Sanders]

Passionate and beautiful .....

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Brenda, this is beautiful.. what a lovely way to say yes!
Feelings of love so well penned ..

Chloe
xoxo

[Belinda Rice]

I really like this alot it kinda made me cry alittle i am a sob...lol....but very pretty poem it was great ty for sharing

[Vatsayayana]

I love how this flows.
It lifts one, spirits them away.
Rainbows pop out and everything is painted gold, pink, cream, red, passionate, loving...
Just stunning imagery.
And the end.... ahhhh... you have my heart beating fast and pure.
What a wish. What a beautiful dream. Just lovely.

[None]

Your words show the extent of your happiness and love throughout this beautiful piece. What a surprise with in the ending! A beautiful moment to share with all and saved for last. Nicely written!

[Sqeaver]

Very good. I really like the line "That I could tickle the whole sky," very creative.

[Y.F.]

I really like how this poem comes from a playful place, yet the emotions described are so sincere.
The imagery is truly phenomenal, and it has so many great lines, such as "That I could tickle the whole sky", "Always traveling in your embrace" etc (wouldn't want to rewrite the whole poem.. :)).
You've truly done a tremendous job on this one.