Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.
Wishing you and Jack the very best! Jackie will be very blessed to have such a wonderful lady for a step mom. I always loved that kid. Was such a nice young man, and now he is not so young any more, but you know-it's funny-He hasn't changed that much. Just looks like an older "Jackie." Tell Jack "Hello" from us and tell him congrats as well!
Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.
Wishing you and Jack the very best! Jackie will be very blessed to have such a wonderful lady for a step mom. I always loved that kid. Was such a nice young man, and now he is not so young any more, but you know-it's funny-He hasn't changed that much. Just looks like an older "Jackie." Tell Jack "Hello" from us and tell him congrats as well!
An amazing, lovely sweet poem, with touches of light humor and emotion. The imagery was fantastic, I love the way you incorporated nature into this. It actually reminded me of a song verse, the flow had that kind of rhythm and style to it. A very pretty piece!
This piece zings along with the strings of your carefree heart Brenda, I loved it! It is a proposal acceptance speech with merit and worthy of praise. How beautiful it is to read such realistic prose. The red rosebud is a wonderful touch.
Restrain...restraint?
Cheers,
Helen :-)))
I can only hope to be on the recieving side of such a poem. Whomever it was intended, is lucky. I can still picture a world rotating around a beating heart. In certain spots the rhyming seemed forced ... or.. more Hallmark like, for lack of a better discription but, overall, well done.
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Everyone has there own beliefs about what Heaven is, whether religiously, spiritually or just musically! (Led Zeppelin) The one thing I found in common with each person though .. more..