Her Answer......

When we're together I fly so high
That I could tickle the whole sky,
Caressing clouds while in the rain,
With you I find I have no restraint.

Flying high in a hot air balloon.
On a one way trip to the moon.
Down to earth... into outer space,  
Always traveling in your embrace.

Dancing and teasing the seashores
A taste of your lips, my spirit soars.
Riding with you, my world is complete  
Rotating around your every heartbeat.

 Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.

 

 

Reviews

[Carole]

This is beautiful Brenda...

Adventure and passion we will add to life
Yes my darling, I will be your wife.

Wishing you and Jack the very best! Jackie will be very blessed to have such a wonderful lady for a step mom. I always loved that kid. Was such a nice young man, and now he is not so young any more, but you know-it's funny-He hasn't changed that much. Just looks like an older "Jackie." Tell Jack "Hello" from us and tell him congrats as well!

Carole XO

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Beautiful write. Isn't love grand?

[Lia]

How beautiful and romantic.

"Flying high in a hot air balloon.
On a one way trip to the moon.
Down to earth... into outer space,
Always traveling in your embrace.

This is a great poem, thanks for sharing.

[Liz Alexander]

The last line was a great ending to this wonderful poem. Brought a smile to my face.

[Emily B]

what a beautiful reply . . .

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Quite lovely. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Pratibha]

this is not only honest but with so much passion....I LOVED IT...kind of rekindles faith and love

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

awsome poem... the love is felt with every word. it truly is a beautiful piece of work well done!

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful love poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Rain]

Just a very sincere light hearted love poem...very touching. Rain..

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This is such a beautiful write as well as warm and sincere, very well written.