Flashes of Light in the Sky

Vigorous lightning

Taking snap shots of the world

Striking where it may

 

Reviews

[Frances O'Neill]

Very dramatic! Great imagination! I like it a lot.

[shadadakiya]

that is wicked,but yet awsome.thx

[Candle in the wind]

This is a flash of brilliance truly!

[Undone1]

This is very powerful and what a wonderful picture!

[W.k.kortas]

"Vigorous" is certainly a different way to describe lightning, yet it's certainly fitting. Crisply constructed haiku, very solidly done.

[E. M. Murren]

Wonderful image... taking snapshots of the world... really nice thought. Cheers.

[Moonlit-Blues]

A silent click, beautifully done. The haiku is the camera, the image has been captured. Nicely done!

[JC Fox]

A lovely haiku and I never thought of the lightening as taking snapshots, great job!

[lori c]

i like the hard sounds in the word ,,,vigorous ,,, when describing the lightning. good choice. the image of it capturing ,,,,snapshots,,,is quite clever. well done.

[kurrupted]

short and simple, strikingly straight and true...i love this piece.