I Hear the Music...

A sonnet

I hear the music when I'm with you.  
Each time the melody sings anew,
Soon the golden notes of the band
Carries me away to another land.
 
As my imagination leaves me speechless,
The orchestra fades into the darkness.
When I remember the feel of your arms,
Soon I am captivated by your charms.  

I hear the music when we're together.
The melody grows for our pleasure,
I soar again, singing sheer bliss.  
As we share another sweet kiss.
 
The strings of the violin I hear
Magically every time you are near.

Author's Note

My fiance really loves music, so I wanted to write a piece that included music.

Reviews

[E. M. Murren]

Your work is always soulfilled and expressive... this one is no exeption. The tone is passionate yet blissful. Truly well expressed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Angel Bird]

This is musically magically beautiful! Love it!

[Red_Queen]

Good. I love the Rhyming.

[Melissa]

I loved the poem. I love music and I know how your imagery feels for real.

[Rob Luciano]

Beautiful sentiment. Such beauty can only come from love and music, you've managed to combine the two.

[j. paul]

Brenda Sue,

What a lovely way to express your feelings! I especially enjoyed your use of rhyme, rhythm, and meter. Your poem imbues such happiness. Well done!

[Lia]

So romantic! Aww, Beautifully penned! Great piece. xx

[Catrinka]

this is so sweet! I'm glad you hear the music! Beautiful write! You are good at making rhyme - I should try to actually write a poem that rhymes...thanks for the inspiration!