Night in the Garden
A Poem by
Brenda Sue
trying my hand at haiku
Moonlight drips softly
Over the garden shadows
Like a lost lover
© 2008 Brenda Sue
Reviews
This is great.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A perfectly written Haiku! Your meaning and content flow so nicely here! I really treasure this.
Posted 16 Years Ago
A perfectly written Haiku! Your meaning and content flow so nicely here! I really treasure this.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
'Moonlight drips softly
Over the garden shadows
Like a lost lover...'
[... seeking you."
Those words just came to mind - my interpretation]
Lovely Haiku. Just lovely.
Posted 16 Years Ago
'Moonlight drips softly
Over the garden shadows
Like a lost lover...'
[... seeking you."
Those words just came to mind - my interpretation]
Lovely Haiku. Just lovely.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Such a lovely penned Haiku~ well done my friend~FranMarie
Posted 16 Years Ago
Such a lovely penned Haiku~ well done my friend~FranMarie
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Lovely meditation. I do love these poetic thoughts. Thank you for sharing them.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Lovely meditation. I do love these poetic thoughts. Thank you for sharing them.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
It's so beautiful!
Posted 16 Years Ago
It's so beautiful!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
pretty. such a lovely image.
Posted 16 Years Ago
pretty. such a lovely image.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
great! 3 lines is all you need for this one -great visual! I see the picture in my mind's eye so clearly!
Posted 16 Years Ago
great! 3 lines is all you need for this one -great visual! I see the picture in my mind's eye so clearly!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 24, 2008
Last Updated on April 3, 2008
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Brenda Sue Chatsworth, GA
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