Night in the Garden

Night in the Garden

A Poem by Brenda Sue
"

trying my hand at haiku

"

Moonlight drips softly

Over the garden shadows

Like a lost lover

 

© 2008 Brenda Sue


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Thank you for entering the contest. I love the visual with this Haiku. Makes you want to take a stroll in the moonlight. The contest ends June 15th, then I will be announcing the winners. Thanks again.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mysterious and enchanting at the same time. Good story within your haiku! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

elusive and hidden. good job

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written haiku
the picture is beatiful as well

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hauntingly lovely. excellent pix.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. I like how it really takes you there.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so tangible I can almost see the drifting moonlight!Comparing it to a lost lover is so poignant. There is something so soothing yet so melancholy about moonlight.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Tight little metaphor, almost textbook. Crisp and solidly done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your Haiku is beautiful. First two verses are awesome, among the best I have ever read. The third one implies sad and distante personalized thought.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely, very well stated! Blessings!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 24, 2008
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Brenda Sue
Brenda Sue

Chatsworth, GA



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