Love Beneath the Moonlight...

Our souls will make history
Your spirit draw thee sweet to me.  
I'll give to thee a lover's kiss,
Dancing beneath the moonlight's bliss.
 
'Neath the silvery paradise,
I'll taste your splendid spice,
Wrapped in the sweetest blanket,
Of a satin lover's sonnet.

Wrap tender songs about me;
Whisper words of sweet beauty.  
Show that you can't live without me
Like the blessed sky so misty.  

Cradle me in your strong embrace;
Caress thy trembling face with lace.  
Your love for me alone proclaim,
'Neath midnight stars aflame.

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

MAGNIFICENT! this is the most beautiful poem i have read in a while. it shows the true wanderings of a hopeless romantic! it is beautiful. the context is the longing that you are seeking forth, i hear it in the words you put so delicately. maybe even that you have found the kind of love in which i can only dream of. i am still lokking for that right one. but this is so beautiful!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very sweet. Full of love and passion.

[ELii]

This is very beautiful and intimate. Good choice of words. I love the olde feel to it. I like the imagery.

[K Antonacci]

Gorgeous word choice!
I love the feel of olde english.
I love also that i can see many visuals in this, and i love these lines:

"Wrapped in the sweetest blanket,
Of a satin lover's sonnet. "

Great job!
Love,
K

[Forest Green]

What a nice poem. Bright clear through the moonlight.

Did my heart good to read this tonight (didn't mean for that to rhyme...;)

Forest

[Erin]

beautiful imagery. Your words have a classic beauty, refined without any rawness. Very smooth.