Love Beneath the Moonlight...

Our souls will make history
Your spirit draw thee sweet to me.  
I'll give to thee a lover's kiss,
Dancing beneath the moonlight's bliss.
 
'Neath the silvery paradise,
I'll taste your splendid spice,
Wrapped in the sweetest blanket,
Of a satin lover's sonnet.

Wrap tender songs about me;
Whisper words of sweet beauty.  
Show that you can't live without me
Like the blessed sky so misty.  

Cradle me in your strong embrace;
Caress thy trembling face with lace.  
Your love for me alone proclaim,
'Neath midnight stars aflame.

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

MAGNIFICENT! this is the most beautiful poem i have read in a while. it shows the true wanderings of a hopeless romantic! it is beautiful. the context is the longing that you are seeking forth, i hear it in the words you put so delicately. maybe even that you have found the kind of love in which i can only dream of. i am still lokking for that right one. but this is so beautiful!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is simply beautiful , reminds of poems from days of old ..
Our souls will make history ... 'neath midnight stars aflame'.. love those lines.
This is a classic love poem ..

Chloe
xoxo

[forfila]

Incredible talent you have, truely a beautiful poem... I love it for lack of a stronger word.

Love,
Me

[JC Fox]

Beautiful and stunning piece I love it

[Kristin Brecoe]

wow. i love this poem. the imagery and wording was priceless. amazing!

-kristin

[Blackbirdsong]

Technically this isn't a sonnet, but it is a lovely read and there are some good descriptions and images throughout.

[Lady Of Darkness]

Beautifully written.
Great job

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Wrap tender songs about me - I love this line! Good write! Love it....

[Isaiah Jay]

Good job.

[Sqeaver]

Very sweet. Great write.

[Sam Freeland]

The sweetness of love
under the stars above
Can easily prove
to those who share
They will be there
forever to care....dreaming dreams....you will be there
Who could resist
words like these
Finding love
that is meant to please