Love Beneath the Moonlight...

Our souls will make history
Your spirit draw thee sweet to me.  
I'll give to thee a lover's kiss,
Dancing beneath the moonlight's bliss.
 
'Neath the silvery paradise,
I'll taste your splendid spice,
Wrapped in the sweetest blanket,
Of a satin lover's sonnet.

Wrap tender songs about me;
Whisper words of sweet beauty.  
Show that you can't live without me
Like the blessed sky so misty.  

Cradle me in your strong embrace;
Caress thy trembling face with lace.  
Your love for me alone proclaim,
'Neath midnight stars aflame.

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

MAGNIFICENT! this is the most beautiful poem i have read in a while. it shows the true wanderings of a hopeless romantic! it is beautiful. the context is the longing that you are seeking forth, i hear it in the words you put so delicately. maybe even that you have found the kind of love in which i can only dream of. i am still lokking for that right one. but this is so beautiful!

[mattavelli]

I think I see where you are going from here. :)
The sexy tension really builds up to the ending.
This is great!
Have fun.

[Catrinka]

I must echo the other reviews - very well done! I love your use of language, the romance of it, favorite line: Dancing beneath the moonlight's bliss - what an image! Stirs my romantic heart! Love it.

[Carole]

This is so eloquently written. Reminds of Shakespeare. You are going to town girl! You go, Brenda...so happy you have transitioned into Chapter two of your life! You are a blessing to the Cafe, hon!

[brianna vega]

i want someone to read this to me

[Jayne Ann Saporito]

You set the senses aswirl here, with sight, touch, taste, the images; this is just a beautiful piece, and I am so glad that you gave me this opportunity to see your work and review. Thank you.
Jayne

[Katrina]

This is lovely.
I love your style.

[Phil Sanders]

How beautiful ... lovely words .. beautifully expressed ...

[Jenny Davis]

This is Beautiful with a capital B!! Loved the style of this piece and the imagery....good stuff :)

[None]

Reading your pretty poem puts me in a dreamy state...a well written romance tale of love always does me in. A gorgeous poem filled with all the good things two lives can bring.

[Tania Leigh]

Wonderfully penned, and the imagery here is sublime.....very nice!