Our Love Can Never Die

Our Love Can Never Die

A Poem by Brenda Sue

Life just isn't the same since God came to take you away.
It's a blessing they say because He took you.
I just never imagined it would end this way.
I couldn't comprehend you'd actually be taken away.
Now I have a void in my heart since the day we've had to part.
The pain is still here; I grieve for you every day.
They say with time it will heal
but there's not enough time in the world for this pain to heal.

I pray you know I've loved you from the very start.
I still can't believe your gone,
I thought we'd live together forever,
I don't know what went wrong.
I always think of you when I hear your favorite song.
I love to think on me your looking down.
I think of you just as I did before,
Because no sudden gust of wind could ever close our door.

I write you this because I know you're there,
that after death there must be more.
I pray that you hear me when I pray,
to know for you I'll always care.
I'll never forget the lessons you taught,
like love is given to be shared and life isn't always fair.
You showed me God is never out of reach and He will always care,
I'll never forget His words, to me you always preached.

Even in death our love Can NEVER die.
Honey, I LOVE YOU Rest In Peace

© 2008 Brenda Sue


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Brenda, your poem makes my heart break a long with yours. They saying losing a spouse is one of the hardest losses there are. Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers. I lost my mom to suicide in '97 and it was the worst pain I had ever known. I wrote about it in Suicide Nightmare if you should want to read it, so I do know pain, just not the pain of a spouse.

This is very well written and heart felt. Thanks for sharing, hon. :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Beautifully written. I am sorry for your loss.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I can feel the sadness and the love. nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You devotion and lost shout out from this poem. You weaved your words masterfully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is great. Almost a eulogy or a tribute that deserves to be read out loud. Great job overall. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

387 Views
14 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 6, 2008

Author

Brenda Sue
Brenda Sue

Chatsworth, GA



About
Rose Glitter Graphics Everyone has there own beliefs about what Heaven is, whether religiously, spiritually or just musically! (Led Zeppelin) The one thing I found in common with each person though .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Our Lives.. Our Lives..

A Poem by Rain