Loneliness

Weaving a dreary cloak.........

with a thread of woe

and a bitter stroke

somber warp and dismal woof

binded by hastened knot

Unbearable,is this blustery night..

chills and shivers down the spine

blister of hurt and pricks of pain

frosty goes the sore skin

shivering fingers tired and gaunt

movements numbed and shadows haunt..

A being, tired and worn out

near the 'fortune' opened forth..


hush!.. let me sleep ..for i m weary ..

longer cannot this soul carry..

more trail is not my share longer..

so let me close my eyes n yonder

lies my very destiny.....

come hither let me embrace thee!

cover me with my woven piece

for i am to see the tunnel of gleam....

Reviews

[zunie frost]

nice poetry but too much full stops are making the poem look messy ... but other then that it's really good i like it !!!!! great poetry keep it up ... 80 points from me !!!