Broken

8th grade poem :]

the path less travled, the beaten and torn down, the wreckage left behind,

the hopes and dreams that go unoticed, the girl in the corner,

the one one who speaks of no life, the person i use to be.

i hope you can see that i mean no harm

ive travled down a path less travled, ive been beaten down and torn, i am the wreckage left behind

i have hopes and dreams that go unoticed, i am the girl in the corner, just the girl in the corner and nothing more.

Reviews

[Dan Bullock]

Keep on writing, let your words take over! I see potential :)

[LEX!S]

for writing this in 8th grade it is really
really good. it has depth and i'm sure
many meanings to you