pain

Drops roll down,
They weigh more than a pound .
These tears can make you drown,
Then you'll be lost and never found.
You deserve this killer crown,
Because you gave me the biggest wound.
I made you smile by being a clown,
I gave you the sky and you showed me the
ground.
You made me cry,
People said she deserved to die.
You were the biggest lie,
And now I too can't deny.
You knew I couldn't survive,
Still to you I handed my life.
You never felt the pain of mine,
Because you were a coward to look me in the
eye.
I am in pain,
And no one is here to drain.
I cried again,
Just because a part of you in me will always
remain.
I wanted to erase you from my brain,
But all attempts went in vain.
I want my happiness to regain,
But the part detached from me was the main.

Reviews

[Leo]

Nice flow to your poem and rhyme is good..vividly describes your painful scenario..nicely penned

But the very last line and particularly the word "main" threw me off track and it weakened your poem and the flow of the last line which is as important as your first one.