Farewell, Brother!

Farewell, Brother!

A Poem by Halbis Macklli

My dear classmate, friend and brother,
Just letting you know there is none other,
Like you as I look towards a new horizon,
The days gone feels like one big season,
Of joy, laughter, and so much fun,
But will you remember some sorrows in the long run ?
As Time flows we will look back as we grow old,
Knowing there are stories to be told,
Of singing, fooling, hiding and "meeting"!
For these will keep our hearts young and beating!
Today, here and now as we gather,
Some will stay, while some may scatter,
But do remember our brothers and school of yore,
And may you reach your destined shore!

© 2015 Halbis Macklli


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Halbis Macklli
My debut poem!

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Great debut......and dedication to friends.......
very honest poem!!
i liked it!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Friends Forever..... Nicely write dear friend.....

As Time flows we will look back as we grow old,
Knowing there are stories to be told,
Of singing, fooling, hiding and "meeting"!
For these will keep our hearts young and beating!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Sounds like a good Gratulation write for the class of 2015 and beyond, very heart warming for friends to read and a beautiful debut poem at that indeed. Nice read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Halbis Macklli

9 Years Ago

Thank you Smitty for those kind words! Yes I wrote it as my friends will part as we leave school thi.. read more
Not bad its witty seasoned and full of life nice poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Halbis Macklli

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much sir!..This is my first poem...and I'm.hoping to write more in the coming days!
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Keep on writing you have a knack

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