Chapter 1- Fallen Devil

Chapter 1- Fallen Devil

A Chapter by BeatLuck

Lord- Eliser!

Eliser- Yes, my lord?

Lord -Have you done all I asked on him?

Eliser- Yes my lord. We suppressed his hands witch black hole orbs, erased his face rendering him mute and blind, attached 1000 demonic leech all over him, wrapped his whole body with sealing scrolls with 284 suppressing curse on them, put his body in between worlds with his head sticking out of the portal like you specified, paired him with the most powerful torment-head set we could find; even monks wouldn't be able to concentrate with those on, we shrunk him to the size of a rat…

Lord -Okay! Got it, bring him in.

Lord " What in the world? I said him, not the whole castle!

Eliser-But my lord, with all we've put him under, it is required to have 1000 warlocks and sorcerers to maintain the his weakened status and is it not wise to have an army surrounding him at all times?

Lord- Urgh* fine, fine, but what’s with the big noise?

Eliser- the torment-head set my lord, it has been on overdrive the moment we put it on him. Is it not a small price to pay for what we’re dealing with?

Lord - yes, yes. Bring him to me.

Eliser-But my lord…

Lord- Will you shut it? Do you remember who brought him to his knees in the first place? Me! Now, bring him to me.

Eliser- Yes my lord, I am sorry my lord.

Lord- Thank you. So, just look at you now…

Eliser- My lord.

Lord- What now?

Eliser- Ahem*, if I may ask, are you not afraid of him?

Lord- Why should I be afraid?  Perhaps you did not see me crush him to the ground with my bare hands?

Eliser- But your injuries were…

Lord- All healed!

Eliser-Then why going through all the trouble to have him incapacitated?

Lord- For Satan’s sake! Do you not remember the result of last our battle, the whole f*****g city was in ruins, everyone had to evacuate and you should already know that we just finished renovating the throne room!

Eliser-Forgive me for asking my lord.

Lord- Now, where was I? Oh yes, the legendary devil. Look at you now, I can insult all I want and nothing will happen ahahaha. *spits on him. …Eliser!

Eliser- Yes my lord?

Lord- Unshrink him. It feels weird talking to a tiny person. Oh, and wipe off the spit, he looks too glossy.

Eliser- Right away my lord. You heard the Kin, unshrink him! And get me a tissue!

Lord- ah, better. It must quite the torment to not be able to die even in the sorry state you are now. Too bad I can’t keep you here.  You’re too much maintenance, no prison can really keep you, and not to mention you’re quite the distraction! I can’t rule hell with you around, so I decided to banish you. I asked God If he’d take you in as a prisoner, but you know how they are, our kind would pollute the Heavens or whatever. However, they did help us a bit with some of the weakening spells on you. They even sent us a special scroll with what seems to be an enchantment written with a tear of God. *reading the scroll, Wow enchantment? Seems like more of a curse to me hehehe.  

Lord- Eliser!

Eliser- Yes? My lord, I am right next to you.

Lord-Doesn’t matter, I just like screaming for my servants. Take him away and put the curse God gave me on him.

Eliser reads the scroll*

Eliser-Are you sure my lord? He could…

Lord- ARE YOU QUESTIONING ME ELISER?

Eliser-No my lord, I will do as you wish.

Lord- I would hope so. Now, go. 



© 2014 BeatLuck


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BeatLuck
I'm really not much of a writer, I just have too much imagination compressed in me; need to get some of it out!

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Interesting premise. I think it may work better as a novel rather than a screenplay.

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10 Years Ago

I wrote this from an unfinished comic I started years ago. I agree with you, but I am not that good .. read more

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