Inner Strength

Inner Strength

A Poem by Brittany_Rena

Walking with a smile on your face everyday
is just a way to get through without seeing any grey.
My only way out to any hurt inside,
is to listen to music instead of going to hide.
You can't run away from reality,
because in all actuality,
where will that get you?
Just remember, things happen for a reason.
Believe in the Lord and you will be given another reason
to smile & and never fade away.

© 2011 Brittany_Rena


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Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it & am really looking forward to hearing more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like your poem, the rhyming is very good. :) Didn't like the last two lines though, feel that reusing the word reason is not particularly effective and also "Believe in the Lord" makes the poem a bit "preachy".

Posted 13 Years Ago


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