When you feel that magic

When you feel that magic

A Poem by binibiningmaya
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"Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own." H. Jackson Brown, Jr.

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Being with someone we love is the best.

You will be having sweet moments together.

 

Being jealous for a while is one of the best ingredients.

And holding their hands is just an awesome feeling.

 

Falling in love is the most amazing feeling that we feel.

You will care for someone like it is the end.

 

You will feel mad when they do something that might harm them

It feels like hell when they are not feeling well.

 

When you are in love everything seems so perfect.

When you fall in love, smile becomes so permanent on your lips.

 

You will sleep with a sweet smile on your lips

Then wake up in the morning with the same smile on it.

 

Awesome feeling! It is like you are just in heaven.

It’s like you will never have a problem because love conquers it

 

When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.

You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness. 

© 2015 binibiningmaya


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Being with someone we love is the best.
You will be having sweet moments together.

Being jealous for a while is one of the best ingredients.
And holding their hands is just an awesome feeling.

Falling in love is the most amazing feeling that we feel.
You will care for someone like it is the end.

You will feel mad when they do something that might harm them
It feels like hell when they are not feeling well.

When you are in love everything seems so perfect.
When you fall in love, smile becomes so permanent on your lips.

You will sleep with a sweet smile on your lips
Then wake up with in the morning with the same smile on it.

Awesome feeling! It is like you are just in heaven.
It’s like you will never have a problem because love conquers it

When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.
You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness.

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Being with someone we love is the best.
You will be having sweet moments together.

Being jealous for a while is one of the best ingredients.
And holding their hands is just an awesome feeling.

Falling in love is the most amazing feeling that we feel.
You will care for someone like it is the end.

You will feel mad when they do something that might harm them
It feels like hell when they are not feeling well.

When you are in love everything seems so perfect.
When you fall in love, smile becomes so permanent on your lips.

You will sleep with a sweet smile on your lips
Then wake up in the morning with the same smile on it.

Awesome feeling! It is like you are just in heaven.
It’s like you will never have a problem because love conquers it

When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.
You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness.

---

The 6th line down can do without "with"...as for this write...seems like young love...a little far back for me...I'm way pass this phase...but the words bring back the past with what you put in the verse...the simplicity of if all...in the moment...which you felt the feelings...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

Oh! Saw it Miss. :-) I'm on it..
Thanks a lot..
^________^
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

You're welcome...



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Being with someone we love is the best.
You will be having sweet moments together.

Being jealous for a while is one of the best ingredients.
And holding their hands is just an awesome feeling.

Falling in love is the most amazing feeling that we feel.
You will care for someone like it is the end.

You will feel mad when they do something that might harm them
It feels like hell when they are not feeling well.

When you are in love everything seems so perfect.
When you fall in love, smile becomes so permanent on your lips.

You will sleep with a sweet smile on your lips
Then wake up with in the morning with the same smile on it.

Awesome feeling! It is like you are just in heaven.
It’s like you will never have a problem because love conquers it

When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.
You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness.

---

Being with someone we love is the best.
You will be having sweet moments together.

Being jealous for a while is one of the best ingredients.
And holding their hands is just an awesome feeling.

Falling in love is the most amazing feeling that we feel.
You will care for someone like it is the end.

You will feel mad when they do something that might harm them
It feels like hell when they are not feeling well.

When you are in love everything seems so perfect.
When you fall in love, smile becomes so permanent on your lips.

You will sleep with a sweet smile on your lips
Then wake up in the morning with the same smile on it.

Awesome feeling! It is like you are just in heaven.
It’s like you will never have a problem because love conquers it

When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.
You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness.

---

The 6th line down can do without "with"...as for this write...seems like young love...a little far back for me...I'm way pass this phase...but the words bring back the past with what you put in the verse...the simplicity of if all...in the moment...which you felt the feelings...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

Oh! Saw it Miss. :-) I'm on it..
Thanks a lot..
^________^
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

You're welcome...
Nice to know you felt that magic!
Im happy for you.
😊

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

Hehe.. Sinulat ko dati Ms. Hanir ^______^

Thanks for reviewing :)
I do agree with your statements.
"When you fall in love everything is so fine and smooth.
You feel like positive vibes is floating you to a paradise of happiness. "
Fresh and new love. Best days of our life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

Yes Sir Coyote...
You are such a great reviewer.. All of your reviews means a lot to me..read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

Is my pleasure and you are welcome.
binibiningmaya

9 Years Ago

^________^

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