My Secret Inspiration

When I was in high school I had a little crush on this guy and he triggered my hands... mind and soul to write this poem :)

Every time that I see your lovely face,

I can see wisdom, courage and high school memories. 

Those sweet and bitter moments that we had before

It makes me feel blue‘cause I don't know 

if we can have them once more.

 

 

I miss the way you gently approached me

I miss your voice that made me felt lucky.

You were always there at my side,

You gave comfort and you served as my idol and guide.

 

 

I know we were not meant for each other

Only friendship binds us together.

I accept it freely because it is far better

All the things you’ve said will be my inspiration 

and these will remain in my heart forever. 

Reviews

[Effervescent Dreams]

Sweet memories put in an eloquent manner... Loved reading it. I think a little tweek would erase some teeny weeny blemishes - Suggestion shown in brackets -
"You've (been) always there by my side" or make it "(You were) always there by my side"
"I know (we) were not meant....."

Hope this helps

Regards,
Nimmi

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks Nimmi :)

I'll do that.. BIG THANKS :)

[Abby Olaco]

I can feel the love.
Being inspired really gives joy in the heart.

[Indra Neil]

emotions, thoughts and feelings are beautifully expressed in this fine write! well done! :)

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks you so much Sir :)

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome! :)

[hanir]

You were truly inspired when you wrote this! ☺
keep writing!

[binibiningmaya]

Thanks Ms. Hanir as always :)
And yes I was hehe.

[gabrielle]

This piece surely brought up those beautiful high school memories. :) i noticed that you used the word "that" twice in the first line. I think the first one can be dispensed with.

[binibiningmaya]

Oh!! Yea it does..

And thanks..
Let me edit it..
Salamat Gab :)