When God Lost His S**t

A peoem.

A journey of light,

A journey of dark,

One in retreat,

The other embark;

Ride along to see the sights,

Ride along in want to start,

What became of everything?

In the middle, in nothing ...

Out of the world,

Out of the woods,

Into the matter,

Onto the should ---

Sing like an angel,

Sing for your life,

Four words are forgotten:

AND IT ISN'T ALRIGHT !!!

But nobody noticed,

When God lost His s**t,

and went all barbaric,

on His little kids !?!

We would both be right!

If we both agreed,

That we both were right!

That we both were free #v^

Reviews

[monono]

"We would both be right!
If we both agreed,
That we both were right!
That we both were free"

Damned I loved that. And the title.

[Gabriel]

I like it but it seems raw. Maybe you should work on it a little bit more, it's definitely good materiall :)