THE WHY

A Poem by Bill Grimes Jr.

To ponder consciousness

Altered states

Dreamscape reality

The why

Far outweighs the when

How it all began

Self discipline

Hardly a prerequisite

Merely lubrication

Mental strain prescription

Life

Lived in increments

One day at a time

The only way for me

Weary eyes

Suddenly

Begin to see

© 2009 Bill Grimes Jr.

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LJW	I hope your weary eyes see beautiful things because you deserve all the best life has to offer. Posted 14 Years Ago I hope your weary eyes see beautiful things because you deserve all the best life has to offer. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle Lea

I really like this piece, it says so much in such few words. Yes, that's life alright. The words used, structure and rhyme are really good, nice flow.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

under your skin

this poem made me think hmm

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 3, 2009

Author

Bill Grimes Jr.

Madison, AL

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Me Child of God at age 53 My heart belongs to my children The essence of my smile My reason to be My soul belongs to Jesus Christ I am because of Him Im a doting Dad Published wordsmith Music.. more..