END OF A DREAM

 

Global woes

Whatever….

We reap as we have sown

Dire news

Crashing down

Haunting melody

Red dawn approaching

Bewildered eyes forced open

End of a dream to most

Blind to earthly fraud

Mans technology

Puffed up accomplishments

Mere droplets

Vast universe

Futile objections

To rational dissection

Artificial savvy

No match for divine intervention

Simple love

Uncontaminated

Made pure by Holy Spirit

The only way

As it is written

Hand of God

Gently on my shoulder

All I need this day

Multitudes

Shall never understand

Hypnotized masses

Ghastly consequence

Truth

Acquired through submission

Sincere humility

Courage at a premium

Faith in force unseen 

Joy

Precisely where I seek it

A matter of personal choice

Be ever watchful

Anxious child of Yahweh

His glory draws nigh

No surprises here

 

 

© Bill Grimes Jr. 2008

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

Global woes
Whatever�.
We reap as we have sown

I love how you opened it. On the news we always hear about
how our planet is doing and stuff like that. God gave us possession
of this world to 'subdue' yet when we fail to turn to him in times of
trouble, and decide we're above him, they wonder why the world is also failing.
I luv how u always go for the throat in your pieces.

Be ever watchful
Anxious child of Yahweh
His glory draws nigh
No surprises here

I totally agree...no surprises here

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Most sobering message representing the calamities of mankind worldwide. Yet in the end when time ceases to exist, what does it all really mean? Have we glorified Yahweh in everything we do or was it just for financial/worldly gain? I think the opening strength of this poem lies with the words, "we reap as we have sown" as you chronologically unfold all of which we are responsible for. Life is a dream and the true awakening is rapture. A powerful scribe.

[Lyrical Love]

His glory draws nigh...AMEN!!
I simply loved this-it so truthful, and eye opening
almost in a lyrical form (what I hear).
Nicely done!

[Lesley]

I love this poem because it's message is so true. Unfortunately, most people would rather mantain the lies you are trying to dismantle.


excellent piece!

[John A Common]

Very true statement,game over man,we are done for. As I see it all empires fall and america will just be the next fallen empire on the list. Very well written.