FLEETING PREMONITION

 

Vain inquisition

Frantic search

For what I thought I knew

Counterfeit compliance

So easily impressed

By my swollen ego

Absolute uncertainty

Deftly woven lunacy

Arrogant He Dog

Twice

Became the child

As it was written

Sidereal years

Forty nine

Fascinating circle

Magnified

Steep lessons

Painful circumstance

Ripened eyes

Melt away the chaff

Reclusive nerve

Pulsating

Sweet romance

A fleeting premonition

 

 

© Bill Grimes Jr. 2008

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

This is a perfect name for this piece. It captures the essence of a premonition. It is fragmented just enough to grab the anxiety element and the flash imagry of a tell tale premonition. There is vanity, a panicy element, a not knowing and a questionoing of the expoerience's relaity and of your own sanity. YOu do not give a lot of detail about what the premonition entaled yet if gives a sense of fear, pain, and a glimpse of romance intertwinned. I felt this premonition even though I did not see your imagry. Well done.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

I love the title.
Great imagery.
I can feel the fear and pain in this piece.
Even the little bit of romance.
Great flow of words.
Excellent rythme.
Wonderfully written piece.
Beautiful Job!
^_^