9-11

                   United we stand!
We sent the soilders to protect the land.
       There gona defeat the tellaband!
                   We are the people.
        We demand to be treated equal.
                   Tormented for life.
                Some even lost a wife.
                We didnt see the flight,
          9-11 many lost thats not right!
             The bold and the strong!
           What was done was wrong!
Sodome Sane thought this was going to be easy.
                The soilders kept him bissy!
                       Now hes dead!
                 Now he has no head.
                         Enofh said!!!!



 

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

This poem had rhythum and apart from a little too much slang or words incorrectly spellt was a good read , thanks for your invite you look more mature than your tender years.