Trying to hide the pain !

feelings

Trying to hide the pain,
that no one sees!
Trying to put my mind at ease.
Its like haveing some disease!
My pain never seems to seize.
Trying to hide the pain,
that no one see's!

Reviews

[brandy]

yeah i spelling isnt that great

[DearWorld]

I thnk like this alot. When i'm hurt, I don't like people to know. But the one line "My pain never seems to seize" is confusing to me... I think you meant "Cease" not "Seize.... But anyways good job XD