Give your love to me

For Honeypot

 

When I am alone with you,

You make my life perfect the way things are.

Need I or you err in our ways, we must be forgiven,

Me as with you,

I’ll swear human we are.

Be full of emotion, love, and life.

There is a clear road ahead after this fog lifts, and

For us, God willing, a lifetime of love.

You will be my Goddess, entrenched in my heart. Remember to

Always know my love for you is rich and full, and to give your love to me.

Reviews

[mystic soul]

great work!! it's very well written romantic poem .... i really enjoyed this one.. wonderful!!

[Voison]

What a beautiful and romantic poem, so tenderness in your words, a truly beautiful poem :-)

[DearWorld]

Very creative and a beautiful poem. great job! XD

[Honeypot]

A double acrostic? Very creative of you. Thank you for writing the poem.
I think its wonderful and I love it. It was very thoughtful of you to do this
and it means alot to me. More than you know. You are very sweet.