Why?

i wrote this poem a few days ago. i was super depessed and i did end up cutting myself but i'm trying my best to get through this. i just feel like no one cares......

As my tears fall

They burn the cuts on my wrist

 

Yeah, you heard me right

But you probably don’t care

You don’t shed tears

And your wrists are bare

 

But I know that you see it

And I know you ignore it

You pretend that I’m ok

And walk away and say, f**k it

 

I can’t make you love me

I can’t make you be my friend

But I want you to remember

My blood is on your hands

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Very dark, with such emotion and honesty. Flows very well. Great poem and I hope you can work through that, life is really rough.

[Jeff]

This is an excellent poem. It brings up such dark emotions, anger and hurt are all over it.

[Talkativeted]

Wow this is really dark. It really feels like you are attacking the reader and that makes it very real. An excellent evoking poem.