Flaws are a fantasy

this is a poem that i wrote for a crush. i wasn't sure if i should give it to him, though. plz comment :D

From the moment I layed eyes on you

I wanted you to be mine

I loved the way you looked at me

And the way your heart would shine

 

The way your voice was country

But still moved sweetly from your lips

The way your off balance step

Still makes me want to slip

 

Your personality is awesome

And your eyes are pure gold

I wish you were the one for me

You were already told

 

The way your teeth are not pearly

But they surely do shine

All of the things that you call flaws

Are a fantasy of mine　

Author's Note

plz tell me if i should give it to him or not!!!